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Вчера, просматривая обновления англоязычных фанфиков, наткнулась на Это чудо. 116 слов:
Harry had joined him at the graveyard in his fourth year, and since that day was working with Voldemort as a spy in the Order of the Phoenix, he had taken Snape's position as spy once Voldemort discovered he was betraying him, and although it would've given him great pleasure to kill him, in the end after much pleading by Harry decided to let the young man kill Snape himself after all the torturous days of having to put up with him at school, no one knew it was Harry that killed him, he knew Dumbledore thought it was he who killed him after finding out about the greasy gits betrayal, but in truth it wasn't.
или Это - 115 слов:
After he was resurrected in the graveyard he sent his death eaters away, they left with gleeful looks on their faces, thinking he was going to torture then kill Harry, but once they were gone he had let Harry down from the tombstone of his father and pulled Harry into a passion filled kiss, they had more of a connection then anyone had known at the time except for Harry and himself of course, Harry knew exactly how they were connected once he felt Voldemort's lips on his own, and Voldemort couldn't hold back any longer and claimed him there and then in that graveyard, not to mention on the very grave of his father.
Между прочим оба предложения взяты из одно фанфика.
Да-а, так написать тоже надо суметь!